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This is a poem I wrote when my ex dumped me. Well, now that it is over and done with I am left with this piece, which I am fairly happy with.

If anyone finds any problems with it let me know.

EDIT: I've reworked the line-breaks a little, but this being an emotionaly-driven piece it is hard to find what lines should go where. Also, though insignificant, I changed "begets" to "spawns".
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Like there is anyway possible that you could improve this... :shrug: